The description of the assignment
should reflect all of the elements you will consider when grading the
composition. Use this checklist each time you assign, set up editing exercises,
and grade a writing assignment. See the
linked example.
Selecting a Topic
The composition topic fits naturally
with the content (theme, cultural focus, reading, film, vocabulary) and
functional grammar (describing events that happened in the past, giving
advice, persuading, requesting information) recently stressed in the course.
Use
writing assignments in the textbook/workbook for inspiration, revising
according to your taste.
Is the topic interesting to you? Do you think it will motivate students to
write? Be realistic: you may find certain topics important and fascinating,
while these same topics may leave students uninspired, over- or under-challenged,
even embarrassed. It is especially difficult for students to defend their
opinions on controversial or sensitive topics, knowing that their use
of the language does not reflect their level of thought. Likewise, students
may find certain topics compelling (their social activities, their love
life, for example), while you do not. Steer away from personal and political
extremes. This doesn't mean that students can't write about serious topics
of social or personal interest. By following this checklist, you can frame
assignments in a way that will minimize confusion, embarrassment, even
agony-for you and your students.
Try
to build in one
degree of critical distance from the students' personal experience
when composing assignments.
Wording of the Assignment
Clearly and succinctly describes
the topic.
Clearly reinforces functional
purpose (describing, narrating, persuading, supporting an opinion,
informing, requesting information, giving advice, etc.)
Clearly states communicative
focus (the implied reader, the appropriate register and tone, etc.
Is it a modern version of a fairly tale directed toward children? An ironic
rewriting of a fairly tale directed for young adult readers?)
Clearly states structural
focus. If students are to write a letter, remind them to use salutation,
closings, etc. If they are writing a dialogue, should they identify speakers
at the beginning? If they are writing a persuasive essay, should they
have an introduction and conclusion?
Clearly states any linguistic
focus: pertinent vocabulary lists; grammar structures; past assignments.
Clearly states editorial
requirements: due dates, spacing, word or page count, etc.
Clearly states grading criteria.
On regular compositions refer students to the grading system posted on
the RCS website (either the holistic guidelines, or the grid). If you
have created your own hybrid grading system, be sure to distribute it
to students, after the Language Program Director approves it. On quizzes
and exams, make sure the topic description clearly prescribes all of the
above, so that students know what is expected of them.
Draft Writing Process
Clearly state what is expected
of each draft. The first draft handed in for evaluation should not be
a "rough" draft.
Let students know how they will be graded. Direct them to the descriptive
grading page.
Underline errors and note their
nature (accord; orthographe; genre; etc.) Spell these out the first time
you write them, then abbreviate naturally. Students should not need a
key to decipher your abbreviations.
Be sure to give stylistic advice
as well.
You may want to use one color
of ink for "fautes évitables," i.e., anything (vocabulary,
structure, style, grammar) that the students should have been able to
do correctly using nothing but the textbook (and a dictionary to check
gender), and another color to indicate corrections they could not have
made themselves, comments, and general advice for revising. Whether or
not you use this color-coding, make sure students understand that they
are not penalized for taking risks, and that some mistakes are not acceptable,
even on draft 1.
After correcting the first composition,
determine how many "fautes évitables" will be acceptable
on the first draft of future papers for an "A," "B,"
"C," "D," "F." Suggestion: one mistake every
20 words.
Do not use peer editing as a
way to get one student to correct the other student's grammar mistakes.
Instead, have peer-editors focus on readability, comprehensibility, structure.
Have students read papers aloud in small groups in class before turning
them in .Allow them to make corrections.
Self-editing: focus on process.
Grading
Make sure you and your students
know grading criteria for writing assignments. Use either the grid or
the descriptive guidelines posted on the RCS web site, or a revised version
of these approved by the Language Program Director.
Read all compositions once quickly,
without marking them, dividing them into piles of "weak," "strong,"
"very good.."
When marking papers, indicate
"fautes évitables" (very basic errors) in some very obvious
way (red ink, "FE").
Make comments in reaction to
content, style, structure, tone-not just grammar. If you have time, use
a different pen or pencil for this.
Be aware that students may introduce
new mistakes on the final draft. These should not count against
them (unless they are "évitables").
In longer compositions (2 pages
or more ) it is reasonable to mark grammar mistakes on the first 1 and
1/2 to 2 pages. Then draw a line, indicating where you have stopped. Continue
to make comments suggestions, reactions to content and style throughout
the paper. Indicate whole paragraphs (rather than individual words) that
will need revision for spelling and grammar.
Copyright 2003 by Cheryl Krueger
Department of French
University of Virginia
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